My latest poem entitled, "Another Pilot Down" has been added to both myDeviantART and Sheezy accounts.
This little ditty had been shelved for about two months now. I tried to take it to other directions but for some reason I just couldn't get passed these few lines that I had written. A lot of the verses that were orignally intended to start the poem off had a whole different personality to them that didn't correctly flow with what I had. So needless to say, I had been sitting on this for awhile now.
I think leaving it the way it was is just fine. I think the feeling that I wanted comes out right. There's no bullshit or tackyness to it that I'm sure previous poems like "3", "His Story", and "Clampdown" sort of had.
Anyway, tell me what you think.
1 comment:
This can be interpreted so many ways. One view might be death, another might be ones state of mind spiraling down into depression.
Makes you think, but i think all great poems do.
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